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Friday, May 8, 2020

tawhirimatea myth and slide show



this is my tawhirimatea myth and slide show. I really liked this activity this week especially making the voki now that was fun! I am still wondering if there are 4 of the other gods as well? here is my voki myth about tawhirimatea and the 4 winds and my slide show hope you enjoy!

3 comments:

  1. I am glad the winds sorted out their problems! Imagine if that went on for too long!!! I am wondering what they were fighting about was it that they wanted the villagers to be peaceful?
    I am wondering if you can edit your writing into 3 paragraphs? Where would paragraph 1 end? Where does the resolution or conclusion begin?

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  2. Hi Bella
    Those villagers certainly had a lot to worry about with the 4 winds creating all sorts of problems! It was hard to see how it was ever going to be sorted out. I like your message at the end. Why do you think the wind gods wanted humans to be calm and peaceful too? It is an interesting idea and it would be great if your story could include that.

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  3. Hi Bella,
    Whew! Thank goodness the four winds all worked in together and all the chaos they created finally came to an end. You chose some great adjectives to show the feeling of the villagers in your story Bella. Well done.

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