Thursday, April 30, 2020
The rocket ship and the two aliens
This is my creative writing. I did it because it was one of the tasks to do for the week. I enjoyed writing about the aliens and how they are not that different from us humans.
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Very creative narrative Bella! I love your similie "looked like they hadn't eaten in months" and the descriptions of aliens and what humans would do to them! I am wondering if you can begin to put your writing in paragraphs. Start with 3 - beginning, middle and end. Paragraphs make our writing easier for the reader to follow. Ka Pai Bella. 👍
ReplyDeleteYou have written an imaginative narrative about Micah meeting aliens on the moon. You had some great ideas, like the houses underground so that humans cannot tell that aliens live there. I wonder if Micah is going to go home and tell anyone about these aliens?
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